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Feeding the Fish

21 May
the lapping on the hull
the harbored ship in dock
the rope around the wooden post
the wake of ships to lap
the passing boats in wash
to push the rills ashore
in cadence beat against the side
combining high the tide
the anchored boy in berth
below the deck in rack
to hear the distant boaters pass
the water rocks his head
his dinner knocks to "up"
the leaning over rail
with fishing food to chuck








2.7 9/7
iambic trimeter, subtle rondeau rhyme, the meter like a wave 
© Brian Peter Hodgkinson    
 
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Posted by on May 21, 2022 in Poetry

 

2 responses to “Feeding the Fish

  1. d.a.simpsonwriter

    May 21, 2022 at 6:52 am

    Splendid

     

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