28 Mar
the thin opaque skin
consciousness in consciousness
the hairs on a root

the river tree tap
drinks freely from its source
green and translucent

mind body switch-back
the body or the spirit
which is more real?

spring summer and fall
winter killing all green things
the skin grows thinner

3.3 6/5
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Posted by on March 28, 2022 in Poetry


One response to “Metaphysic

  1. literaryscribe

    March 28, 2022 at 1:08 pm

    I love the imagery here, especially since the seasons just changed recently. There’s that focus on a transitional state that you describe so poignantly. Nice!



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